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shuman
PostPosted: Mon Nov 04, 2002 7:53 pm 
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One of my favourite Gulzar written Ghazal...

Din Kuch Aisey Guzarta Hai Koi
Jaisey Ehsaan Utarta Hai Koi
Aaina Dekh Kar Tasal-li Hui
Humko Is Ghar Mein Janta Hai Koi
Paak Gaya Hai Sajar Pe Fal Shayed
Phir Se Patthar Uchaltaa Hai Koi
Der Se Gunj-tte Hain Sannate
Jaisey Humko Pukarta hai Koi

I know what the ghazal mean litterally and would like to share with some non-indians... could anyone kindly translate this in an appealing form...
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Zoran009
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 04, 2002 10:53 pm 
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OK!! Shuman..kiya yaad karogey!!
I think, I have to do the HONOR!!


Din Kuch Aisey Guzarta Hai Koi

(((Any of the day!! goes on,/passes, like this))



Jaisey Ehsaan Utarta Hai Koi
(((just the way, some body pays back an obligatory favour))


Aaina Dekh Kar Tasal-li Hui
(((I was satisfied after looking at the mirror)))


Humko Is Ghar Mein Janta Hai Koi
(((That some body is familliar with me/or knows me in this house!)))


Paak Gaya Hai Sajar Pe Fal Shayed
(((Perhaps the FRUIT on the tree is READY/rippened)))


Phir Se Patthar Uchaltaa Hai Koi
(((as some body is again throwing stones at it)))


Der Se Gunj-tte Hain Sannate
(((( QUITENESS//SILENCE(precise), has been ROARINg for a long time now)))


Jaisey Humko Pukarta hai Koi
((( Just like, the way, some body is CALLING for me( it seems like that)))


Well!! did my BEST!! but original URDU poetry ki BAAT hi kuch aur hai!!

*** GULZAR ko CHAHNA aur URDU zuban ko na jananna!! is like a SIN!!

Cheers!! Happy DEEWALI! to ALL!!

I ADORE, GULZAR 's POETRY!!




:baaa: :D :cool: :love:



Edited By arsh on 1036454132
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Aarkayne
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Awright here goes....a very weak attempt at recapturing Gulzar-saab's brilliant original....


Days, weeks and months pass,
Repaying a lifelong debt, in a trance.
A chance encounter with one's own reflection,
Is reassuring knowledge of another acquaintance,
Perhaps the fruit has ripened in its branch,
That it hath become a target to stones,
The echoes of silence take their time in ringing,
As though someone called out in afterthought.


Last edited by Aarkayne on Wed Dec 01, 2004 12:23 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Zoran009
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Thats PRETTY DARN GOOD! lol..Cheers!!
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shuman
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 05, 2002 5:36 pm 
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you guys are great! both of you!! Thanks...

:) :) :cool: :cool:
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Aarkayne
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shuman wrote:
you guys are great! both of you!! Thanks...

:) :) :cool: :cool:

You are more than welcome - :-)

"Thats PRETTY DARN GOOD! lol..Cheers!!"

..and that sir is awfully generous of you....

later.
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Zoran009
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Aise kehtey haen!!""AADAB ARZ HAI""" :baaa: :laugh: :cool:
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